English Usage, Style & Composition

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A

Abbreviations
Academic degrees
Academic departments
Academic titles
Affect, effect
Alumnus, etc.
American Indians
Among, between

C

Capitalization
Carat, caret, karat
Collective nouns
Commas in a series
Compose, comprise
Compound nouns

D

Dean’s list
Disc, disk
Disinterested, uninterested
Due to
Duke’s units, official names

F

Foreign words and phrases
Full time, part time
Fundraising, fundraiser

H

Handicap, disability
He or she, his or her
Historic, history
Hopefully
Hurricanes
Hyphenation, Em dash

I

Impact
Imply, infer
Institutes
Internet, Web, Technology
Iran, Iraq
Italics, quotation marks

K

Kmart, Wal-Mart, etc.

L

Lay, lie
Less, fewer
Like, as
Local places

M

Months, seasons
Mohammed
Mount, mountains
mm, mph

N

Numbers

O

Only

P

Possessives
Prefixes

R

Ranges
Religions
Religious holidays

S

Saint
Schools and years
Scot, Scots, Scottish, Scotch
States, names of

T

That, which
Time element
Titles of books, movies, plays, etc.
Trademarks

W

Who, whom

 

Please note: Through the following examples, italics are used to highlight the word or phrase in question, and not to indicate that the word or phrase should be italicized.

abbreviations These titles are capitalized and abbreviated before a name:

Dr.
Gov.
Lt. Gov.
Rep.
Sen. (Sens.)
and all military titles (Gen., Adm., Col., Maj., Capt., Pvt., Pfc, etc.)

Professor is never abbreviated and only capitalized if part of a title, e.g. Joe Smith, the Eugene Jones Professor of Chemistry, …

United States and United Nations — spell out on first reference, then abbreviate U.S. and U.N. as nouns on second and subsequent references. Abbreviate always when used as adjectives. OK to leave out periods in headlines: A UN commission ….

The United States contribution to the U.N Climate Fund is larger than that of any other nation.

The U.S. ambassador said she will not protest the meeting at the United Nations. But a U.N. spokeswoman said …

academic degrees bachelor of arts (B.A.)(a bachelor’s)

bachelor of divinity (B.D.)

bachelor of laws (LL.B)

bachelor of science (B.S.)

doctor of law (J.D.) (a doctorate)

doctor of laws (L.L.D.)

doctor of medicine (M.D.)

doctor of philosophy (Ph.D.)

master of arts (M.A.) (a master’s)

master of public policy (M.P.P.)

master of science (M.S.)

academic departments Academic departments are in lowercase (the music department, the physics department) except when the subject in question is a proper noun (the English department, the German department).

Department names used in an official sense are uppercase (e.g., Duke’s Department of Chemistry, the Department of Music). The same is true for institutes, centers, schools, etc.

 

academic titles Capitalize titles before a name.

Duke University President Vincent E. Price

Trinity College Dean Valerie Ashby

Lowercase after a name or when used alone.

Vincent E. Price, the president of Duke University

Valerie Ashby, dean of Trinity College

Exceptions are names of chaired professorships.

Alice Mary Baldwin Professor of History William H. Chafe and

William H. Chafe, Alice Mary Baldwin Professor of History

Doctor, M.D., Ph.D. — See entry here.

For news releases, only use Dr. before the name of an M.D.: Dr. Mary Smith wrote a book. (AP does not use Dr. before the name of someone with a Ph.D.)

affect, effect Affect, the noun, describes an emotion, and is used mainly in psychology. AP style says to avoid using “affect” as a noun.

The patient showed little affect.

Affect, the verb, means to influence.

His illness affected his grades.

Effect, the noun, means result or outcome.

His illness had an effect on his grades.

Effect, the verb, means to bring about, to create.

The department chair effected big changes.

alumnus, etc. An alumnus is a male graduate, an alumna a female graduate. Alumni are both male graduates and male and female graduates combined. Alumnae are female graduates.

The same endings apply for emeritus, meaning a retired faculty member.

American Indians The AP Stylebook suggests that this usage is preferable to Native Americans, since the ancestors of American Indians migrated to North America from Asia.
among, between Between introduces two items, among more than two.

The applicant had to decide among Duke, Harvard and Princeton.

The applicant had to choose between Duke and Princeton.

Pronouns following these prepositions are in the objective case.

The choice was between us and them.

capitalization Avoid unnecessary capitals.

Capitalize:

proper nouns: James B. Duke

proper names: Duke University, the Eno River

popular names: the Bull City, the Triangle

titles (see Academic Titles, above, and Titles, below): “Dear Old Duke”

University, by itself, meaning Duke, is never capitalized.

President Price described the university’s master plan.

Faculty is not capitalized unless it’s part of a proper name: Duke Faculty Commons; The faculty agenda includes ….

carat, caret, karat A carat is a measure of weight of precious stones. A caret is a proofreader’s symbol, indicating where words or letters are to be inserted. A karat is a measure of the portion of pure gold in an alloy.

 

collective nouns Nouns and proper nouns denoting units (class, choir, committee, fraternity, orchestra, team, Duke, Microsoft) are singular and take singular verbs and pronouns.

The Arts & Sciences Council adjourned for the summer. It meets again in September.

The team is on a road trip. It plays tonight in Atlanta.

However, team names and band names take plural verbs and pronouns.

The Beatles remain the world’s most influential band.

The Blue Devils won last night. They dominated on defense.

commas in a series Use a comma after each item in a series except before the conjunction (unless the last item includes a conjunction.)

Example:
Students eat lunch at the Cambridge Inn, the Alpine Atrium and the Perk.

The exception to the rule is if the last item in the series includes a conjunction. In this instance, use a comma after each item in the series:

I had orange juice, toast, and ham and eggs for breakfast.

compose, comprise Compose, in the passive voice, means to be made up of.

Duke University is composed of nine schools.

Comprise, best used only in the active voice, means to contain or include.

Duke University comprises nine schools.

compound nouns When in doubt whether a noun is open (half note, half brother), closed (halfback, halftone), or hyphenated (half-moon, half-life), consult a dictionary. (Also see Prefixes, below.) Some examples:
African-American
Afro-American
attorney general
blue green
bookkeeping
coal mining
crosswalk
decision maker
decision making
ex-president
first-grader
French Canadian
full moon
half-century
half-dollar
headache, toothache
Italian-American
key of B minor
key of B-flat
key of F-sharp
key of G major
Latin American
mid-Atlantic
midsummer
Native American
near miss
northeast
notebook, textbook
one-half, one-eighth
oversight
policymaker
president-elect
quasi corporation
self-knowledge
vice chairman
vice president
vice provost
dean’s list Always lowercase;

Example:
He made the dean’s list three straight semesters.

disc, disk computer disk or diskette
floppy disk
disc jockey
laserdisc
videodisc
disinterested, uninterested Disinterested means impartial, uninterested means lacking in interest.
due to Due is an adjective that follows the verb to be or modifies a particular noun.

The cancellation was due to snow.

Cancellations due to snow disrupted the semester.

It should not be used in adverbial phrases to mean because of.

Instead of: Due to snow, classes were canceled.

Use: Because of snow, classes were canceled.

Duke’s units, official names Arts & Sciences and Trinity College

Divinity School

Duke University Health System (lowercase “health system” if on its own)
*(Duke Medicine is an umbrella term that refers to all of the component entities — Duke University Health System, Duke University School of Medicine, Duke University School of Nursing, etc. Duke University Health System refers ONLY to the clinical entities — Duke University Hospital, Duke Raleigh Hospital, outpatient clinics and facilities, etc.)

The Fuqua School of Business

Graduate School

Nicholas School of the Environment

Pratt School of Engineering

Sanford School of Public Policy

School of Law

School of Medicine

School of Nursing

Undergraduate women who attended Duke between 1930 and 1972 were students in the Woman’s College, not the Women’s College.

See also: Schools and class years, below.

foreign words
and phrases
Foreign words and phrases found in a standard English dictionary are not italicized:
al-Qaida

dolce vita

fait accompli

hacienda

jihad

kibitz

mah-jongg

mea culpa

troika

tsunami

Nouns that in German would be capitalized are in English lowercase: doppelgänger or doppelganger, schadenfreude, weltschmerz.

full time, part time Hyphenate the adjective, not the noun.

Full-time employees work full time. Part-time employees work part time.

fundraising, fundraiser One word in all cases.

The Campaign for Duke was a fundraising effort. Fundraising is important to the university’s future.

handicap, disability Please refer to people with disabilities or disabled rather than to the handicapped.
he or she, his or her Using he or she and his or her to be fair to both genders can be awkward. It is often simpler to make the noun plural.

Instead of:
A student gets good grades when he or she studies hard.

Use:
Students get good grades when they study hard.

historic, history When the h in these words is pronounced, the indefinite article should be a:

a historic moment
a history professor

hopefully This adverb means in a hopeful manner.

The students waited hopefully for tickets.

It should not be used to mean it is hoped.

Instead of:
Hopefully, tickets would be available.

Use:
They hoped tickets would be available.

hurricanes All hurricanes take an indefinite pronoun.

Hurricane Fran hit Durham in 1996. It (not she) caused extensive flooding.

hyphenation, em dash Compound modifiers before nouns are hyphenated.

The trustees approved a long-term strategic plan.

Exceptions: Compounds with very and with adverbs ending in –ly.

A D is a very low grade.

A D is not an easily forgotten grade.

Compound modifiers after the verb to be are hyphenated.

The strategic plan is to be a long-term document.

 

Use an em dash to denote an abrupt change in thought in a sentence or an emphatic pause.

Use two hyphens and include a space before and after each:

This is excellent — as usual — so we will take it.

impact Impact is a noun.

The team’s losing record had an impact on attendance.

Its use as a verb meaning affect or influence is common, but should be avoided.

Instead of:
The team’s losing record impacted attendance.

Use:
The team’s losing record affected attendance.

imply, infer Speakers and writers imply, listeners and readers infer.
institutes The seven Duke University institutes and their affiliated centers contribute problem-focused, interdisciplinary research and education, and generate knowledge in the service of society through initiation and facilitation of collaborations and programming.  More information is at http://interdisciplinary.duke.edu/institutes/index.php

Duke Global Health Institute, Duke Institute for Brain Sciences, Institute for Genome Sciences and Policy, John Hope Franklin Humanities Institute, Kenan Institute for Ethics, Nicholas Institute for Environmental Policy Solutions, Social Science Research Institute

internet, web, etc. The following capitalizations, spellings and hyphenations are recommended:

app
avatar
blog
cellphone
click-throughs
crowdsourcing
Duke on Demand
Duke Today
e-commerce
eBay
email
e-reader (Kindle, Nook)
GIF
geotagging, geolocation
Google, Googling, Googled
hashtag
internet (now lowercase; avoid using “the Net”)
iPad, iPhone, iPod (iPod Nano, iPod Touch, etc.)
iTunes U
JPG
mashup
microblogging
“Office Hours”
online
PDF
smartphone
to text, text message, texted, texting
Tumblr
Twitter (n.), tweet (n., v.)
Voice over Internet Protocol (VoIP on second reference)
web, website, web page, web browser
wiki, Wikipedia
Working@Duke
YouTube (also, Duke’s channel on YouTube)

Iran, Iraq Iran is not an Arab nation. Its people are Persian, Azerbaijani, Kurdish and other ethnic groups. The principal language is Farsi, an Indo-European language, also known as Persian, that is written with Arabic characters. Ninety percent of Iranians are Shiite Muslims, 10 percent Sunni Muslims.

Iraq is an Arab nation. The principal language is Iraqi, a dialect of Arabic. Sixty-five percent of Iraqis are Shiite Muslims, 30 percent Sunni Muslims.

The Kurds, Sunni Muslims who speak a dialect of Farsi, are a large minority in both countries.

italics, quotation marks AP does not italicize words in stories.  Composition titles of created works, i.e., books, movies, operas, plays, songs, television programs, and works of art are put in quotation marks.

In general, do not use italics or quotation marks for emphasis or to suggest irony or special usage:

Some students questioned whether the painting should be considered “art.”

In particular, do not use italics or quotation marks around clichés or figures of speech:

The tuition increase will have an impact on the university’s “bottom line.”

Nicknames are enclosed in quotation marks.

Harold “Spike” Yoh, former chairman of Duke’s Board of Trustees.

 

Kmart, Wal-Mart, Hewlett-Packard, Packard Bell, etc. When in doubt about the spelling and punctuation of company names, check with the press relations department at corporate headquarters. Even official websites may contain errors.
lay, lie Lay (past tense: laid; past participle: laid; present participle: laying) is an action verb meaning to put or place; it takes a direct object.

The student lays down his pencil.

The student laid down his pencil.

He has laid down his pencil.

He is laying down his pencil.

Lie (past tense: lay; past participle: lain; present participle: lying) means to be or stay at rest horizontally. It cannot take an object.

The pencil lies on the desk.

The pencil lay on the desk.

The pencil has lain on the desk.

The pencil is lying on the desk.

less, fewer In general, less refers to things that can be measured, fewer to things that can be counted.

The student had less free time, even though he took fewer classes.

like, as Like is a preposition that requires an object.

She plays defense like a pro.

As is a conjunction that introduces a clause.

She plays defense as the coach taught her.

local places Research Triangle Park, then RTP in subsequent references.

the Triangle, and eight-county region in the Piedmont of North Carolina consisting of  Chatham, Durham, Franklin, Harnett, Johnston, Orange, Person, Wake.

months, seasons Months are uppercase, seasons are lowercase. Abbreviate all months with a date except March, April, May, June, July.

May 15. July 4. Feb. 13. Dec. 25.

It was the summer of 1975. We worked hard all winter.

Oasis first performed at Knebworth, England, on Aug. 10, 1996, attracting 135,00 fans.

Mohammed Preferred over Muhammad, Mahomet or other spellings for the founder of Islam.
mount, mountains Mount is spelled out, mountain is capitalized as part of a proper name.

Mount Mitchell is in the Black Mountains.

mm, mph Do not use periods; abbreviate in all uses.

The White Lecture Hall has 16mm and 35mm film projectors. (Note: No space is used.)

The campus speed limit is 25 mph.

numbers Spell out whole numbers below 10, use figures for 10 and above.

The department has 15 faculty and two administrative assistants.

Exceptions:

Ages:
She has a son, John, 7.
She has a 7-year-old son, John.

Dimensions:
The photograph is 6 inches by 9 inches.
The sophomore is 6 feet 5. He is a 6-foot-5 sophomore.

Percentages:
Only 4 percent of undergraduates do not return for their sophomore year.

Time:
The class starts at 9 a.m. (Not: 9:00 a.m. or 9 A.M.)
Try to avoid starting a sentence with a figure.
Seventy students enrolled in the class.

Rewrite: There are 70 students enrolled in the class.

only Make sure that only modifies what you want it to modify.

He only studies on weekends means that on Saturday and Sunday he does nothing but study.

He studies only on weekends means that he doesn’t study Monday through Friday.

possessives Singular nouns add an apostrophe and an s.

Example:

the team’s record.

Exceptions:
appearance’ sake, conscience’ sake, goodness’ sake

The AP Stylebook lists as exceptions singular nouns ending in s and followed by words beginning with s:

the witness’ story, but the witness’s recollection
the hostess’ soirée. but the hostess’s party

Plural nouns add an apostrophe:

the students’ grades

Exceptions:

Plural words used descriptively.
The Blue Devils coach

a writers guide

An apostrophe and an s are required, however, when a term involves a plural word that does not end in s: Duke Children’s Hospital, a people’s republic.

Names ending in s, add an apostrophe:

Charles’ dog

Chameides’ staff

Jesus’ mother

Moses’ law

For names ending in z and x, add an apostrophe and an s:

Berlioz’s opera

Marx’s writings

Xerox’s profits

 

 

prefixes most nouns, verbs, adjectives, and adverbs formed with the following prefixes are closed (e.g., anteroom, neoclassical):
ante (antediluvian)
anti (antihero)
bi (bisexual)
bio (biodiversity)
co (coauthor, cooperate)
counter (counteroffensive)
extra (extracurricular)
infra (infrastructure)
inter (intercollegiate)
intra (intrasquad)
macro (macroeconomics)
meta (metadata)
micro (micromanage)
mid (midcentury)(but: mid-Atlantic)
mini (minibus)
multi (multistory)
neo (neoclassical)
non (nonviolent, nonprofit)
over (overvalued)
post (postdoctoral)
pre (prearranged)
pro (proconsul) (but: pro-choice,
pro-life, pro-American)
proto (prototype)
pseudo (pseudoscience)
re (reunite, reexamine)
semi (semiannual, semiconductor)
socio (socioeconomic)
sub (substandard)
super (superego, superimpose)
supra (supraorbital)
trans (transoceanic)
ultra (ultraconservative)
un (unenthusiastic)
under (underfunded)
ranges Use this form:
$5 million to $10 million, not $5-10 million
5,000 to 10,000, not 5-10,000
religions Anglicanism (Anglican)
Baptist Church (Baptist)
Buddhism (Buddhist)
Catholicism (Catholic)
Church of Christ, Scientist (Christian Scientist)
Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-
day Saints (Mormon)
Religious Society of Friends (Quaker)
Hinduism (Hindu)
Islam (Muslim)
Judaism (Jew)
Eastern Orthodox churches (Greek Orthodox Church, Russian Orthodox Church)
Protestantism (Protestant)
Religious Society of Friends (Quaker)
Roman Catholicism (Roman Catholic)
Seventh-day Adventist Church
Shiism (Shiite)
Shintoism (Shintoist)
Sunnism (Sunni)
Taoism (Taoist)
United Methodist Church (Methodist)
religious holidays Please use the following spellings:
Ash Wednesday
Christmas (and Christmastime)
Easter
Good Friday
Hanukkah
Holy Week
Lent
Passover
Ramadan
Rosh Hashana
Yom Kippur
Saint Abbreviate in place names and the names of saints:

St. Paul, Minn.; St. John’s Newfoundland; St. Christopher

Exceptions:
Saint John, New Brunswick; Sault Ste. Marie, Mich.

schools and years For external use, say, “Jones, a 1965 graduate of the Trinity College of Arts & Sciences at Duke, …

For internal use, our style for the school and class year of alumni is: School initial ’YY (use an apostrophe, not a single open quotation mark)

(In 2024 and thereafter, we will have to distinguish between, for example, T’2024 and T’1924.)

Trinity College T’YY
Divinity School D’YY
The Fuqua School of Business B’YY (Do not use F, which is reserved for graduates of the Nicholas School of the Environment and Earth Sciences, formerly the School of Forestry and Environmental Studies)
Graduate School G’YY
Nicholas School of the Environment F’YY
Pratt School of Engineering E’YY
Sanford School of Public Policy S’YY
School of Law L’YY
School of Medicine M’YY
School of Nursing N’YY
Woman’s College WC’YY

Also:
Engineering/Professional Programs X’YY
Graduate School of Nursing R’YY
House Staff (hospital interns treated as alumni by Medical Development) H’YY
Parents are designated P’YY, with an explanation of which school their child or children attended. Grandparents are GP’YY.

Scot, Scots, Scottish, Scotch A Scot is a native of Scotland.

Scots are the people of Scotland.

Scottish modifies someone or something from Scotland.

Scotch is a type of whiskey. When the two words are used together they are spelled Scotch whisky.

states, names of AP now says to spell out states in all references.

He lives in Raleigh, North Carolina. (Not Raleigh, N.C.)

that, which That introduces clauses essential to the meaning of a sentence (and never set off by commas).

Duke is the university that James B. Duke founded.

Which introduces nonessential clauses (always set off by commas).

Duke, which was founded by James B. Duke, is located in Durham, N.C.

time element In external news releases, use the day of the week, not “today.”

President Vincent E. Price announced Wednesday …

titles of books, movies, plays, etc. Put quotation marks around the titles of books, movies, operas, plays, poems, songs, television programs and works of art. Capitalize the first and last words and all nouns, pronouns, adjectives, verbs, adverbs and subordinating conjunctions (if, because, as, that, etc.). Lowercase definite and indefinite articles, coordinating conjunctions (and, but, or, for, nor) and prepositions.

“Let Us Now Praise Famous Men”

“It Happened One Night”

“The Marriage of Figaro”

“Death of a Salesman”

“Ode on a Grecian Urn”

“Just One of Those Things”

“Who Wants to Be a Millionaire”

“Adoration of the Magi”

Exceptions:

The Bible, the Koran, the Torah,

Reference books, directories, dictionaries, encyclopedias, etc.

Encyclopedia Britannica

American Heritage Dictionary of the English Language

Books In Print

Names of newspapers, journals or magazines do not take quotation marks and are not italicized. (Note:“the” may or may not be part of a paper’s name. Check each publication to be sure. Websites are a good source.)

The Herald-Sun

The News & Observer

The New York Times

New York Daily News

The New Yorker

Science

Nature

U.S. News (with a space) was formerly U.S.News & World Report (no space). Its website is www.usnews.com.

trademarks The following words are trademarks:

Ace Bandage

AstroTurf

Band-Aid

Scotch Tape

Seeing-Eye dog

Sheetrock

Spandex

Styrofoam

Velcro

Xerox (never used as a verb)

The following are generic:

aspirin

cellophane

escalator

nylon

pingpong (unless referring to the table tennis equipment made by Ping-Pong)

rayon

thermos (unless referring to the vacuum bottle made by Thermos)

yo-yo

(When in doubt, try typing the word into a search engine window. Trademarks often have websites, e.g., www.velcro.comwww.spandex.com.

who, whom Who refers to the subject of a sentence, clause or phrase.

The students who worked with tutors got high grades.

Whom refers to the object of a verb or preposition.

The students whom the tutors helped got high grades.